The demo looks really interesting. I am one of those people who care A LOT about the MC's personality and I have to say this looks really promising. She is so relatable. I found myself taking photos of things she thought and sending them to my friends with the captions ''OMG ME'' multiple times.
The romance-able characters seem pretty good too, tho I can't say for sure yet. I am 100% into the professor tho and possibly the barista. Not really feeling the other 2 but that's just my personal preference (although I'll still give them a try when the game comes out). I'd really love a wizard route tho (I'm sure you guys will get to the Kickstarter fund for it so I'm not worried about that)
Other than that, the art is really nice! The characters all look really unique and their design is very aesthetically pleasing.
If I have to say one thing that needs improvement I'd say maybe the transitions could be a little faster. I accidentally quit the game in the middle and since there's not a save button yet I had to replay it. It took a while, thanks to the very slow transitions. It looks very good, but I can see it getting slighly annoying with time, so maybe if that were a little bit faster.
That's all I have to say! I'll be sure to join your Kickstarted when I finally get a job haha. Until then, good luck on this and I'm looking forward to playing it!